Quick scratch story WIP

Hey. I'm Tiger! The one with the, you know, headdress & Wings. I had my wings ever since I was a pup, but my headdress is another story. When I proved I was a loyal warrior alpha leader. Let me tell you my story. Long ago, my family was in trouble of Fireblaze/Hotfire the fiery Devil wolf. They call her the death alpha, because she's death as a wolf. Anyway, when I was a young teen wolf, I tried to defeat her, but my mom stepped in and said I wasn't ready. But boy I was. Every once in a while a car would go by and sometimes a person would come out to take photos of us and of course, I smiled. Once they spotted Fireblaze and she ran away before they could snap a photo. That was also a good time, because I met of of my friends, Phantom, in that forest. Me and him trained for ages until, once when Fireblaze took Phantom! He was stuck in her fire portal! I couldn't think of what to do but hide, until I realized I had wings. I flew into the portal but had bigger problems. I was stuck in that portal! I tried to bust out but Phantom said " It's no hope." I didn't believe him, and kept flapping my wings and busting the portal. "I.... I guess your right." I said lowering my head down while sighing. We tried, and tried, and it was forever we were in the under worlds until I saw a small chain leaking to earth. I crawled in the portal, and called Phantom to come so he wouldn't be stuck in the under worlds. We were finally free after 2 years! My mother and brother cried, hugging me. I was awarded the headdress for being brave and optimistic to break out of the under world portal. I saw what the world wasn't ready for. I saw death. My brother gave me a tail armor as a sign of bravery, I hugged him. Now I live in The City of Halo, most popular city in the country. Phantom's brother, Sunlight, my other friend, smiled at me and thanked me for saving his brother. I know Fireblaze is still out there, waiting to attack me, that's why I never really howl anymore. Today was the first day of Winter, I was excited. I ruffled my tail armor on, fluffed my feather, and got on my wing bracelets. I was ready. I had very little amount of power given from my father. I miss him. He gave me the power to control Winter and snow. But to me, it was awesome controlling 3 months for my pack. I was napping start the month with some sprinkles of light snow. Phantom, Chocolate, and Sunlight cheered me on. I heard a whisper and shivered. She knew where I was. "Everyone! Let's move! We'll get to the nearest safe place!" I said. Everyone looked confused. " I'll tell you once we migrate." I said as loud as I could. We traveled across the state, moving from Halo, my favorite city. " Listen, I don't want to move away either, but we are forced too. Fireblaze, she's, she's coming." Everyone gasped. I continued. " And I don't want anyone hurt or taken to the underworld." Phantom shook his head, agreeing. "Then we shall continue." He said. We started to walk But a blizzard flew by. "Tiger, we know your making a pain in the butt." Marshmallow said. "No, I..... I'm not doing that." I explained. A whoosh went by. I know what's happening Now! "Run!" I screamed. Fireblaze took me by her fire and chained me up. She knocked me out and I tried to run, but couldn't.
I blinked my eyes and yawned awake. " You, you lier! You promised me you'd stop chasing after me!" I yelled. " Oh..... cuddly wuddly bear. I remember when you were just a cute pup!" She giggled. " Well, now I'm old Now!" I said roughly. "Your right. That should explain why I should finally defeat yyou once and for all!" She called. I sighed. " Okay, you can kill me, but do me one favor. Promise me you'll no longer harm my family, my pack." I said. "Actually, maybe I should kill your mother instead." She decided. "No!" I screamed. It was too late though, she had a hunter shoot her. I cried, I snuffled. She was gone, I was trapped, and my pack was in danger. All because of me, i lead the pack the wrong way. "Next is You!" Fireblaze smiled. " You! You! YOU!" She laughed. Oh no. I flapped my wings. "Leave me alone! I already have too much stress!" I yelled. "Great! More stress is more pain!" She smurked. I was done for. She clawed a cross on my flank. I felt pain. With her fire claws it felt like death itself. I grunted. She took my soul. I didn't know what life was anymore. I suffered. A teardrop hit the floor, causing s volcano to erupt. "Perfect! You made it much better!" She said. " Now to hurt your pack. Huh bye! She flew off andeft me stranded to Die. Lava started to leak.